Friday, August 14, 2009

slogan earring

a haiku

keeping the 'uh' in spasmataz
since nineteen-seventy-three!

does that work at all?

1 comment:

ro6ot said...

this was a draft post tucked away in scribefire, which I discovered while waiting for my ipod to finish syncing. as may be obvious, I just posted it as-was rather than editing.

I know the syllable-count is off (depending wether one thinks of the middle line as being '1973') but I like how the pause/change point is the extra space before the third line.

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