a haiku
keeping the 'uh' in spasmataz
since nineteen-seventy-three!
does that work at all?
keeping the 'uh' in spasmataz
since nineteen-seventy-three!
does that work at all?
trying to grasp the idea of what this life is in the hands of my mind, so as to roll it around a little and thus form it into a thing, to hold up and show to you
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this was a draft post tucked away in scribefire, which I discovered while waiting for my ipod to finish syncing. as may be obvious, I just posted it as-was rather than editing.
I know the syllable-count is off (depending wether one thinks of the middle line as being '1973') but I like how the pause/change point is the extra space before the third line.
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